Wednesday, 31 May 2017

Old Rugby League Post

                               

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  1. I like the way that you have used a repeated line in your poem, Emily. Using powerful and precise adjectives and verbs helps the reader get a picture on their mind. So you could think about old and big what image do you want to portray. For example old - is it threadbare? tattered? ramshackled? old-fashioned?

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