Wednesday, 31 May 2017
Wednesday, 24 May 2017
Old League Post Poem
WALA: Using poetic devices to craft a good poem that puts a picture in your head. We understand why we are writing - what's the purpose - and can shape/craft our ideas with effort.
Old Rugby League Post’s
Every Saturday I am like a goalie at each end of a hockey pitch
instead of moving I stay still
Every Saturday Kids come to play Rugby League
Kick balls across my Cross bar since I am a giant H
Every Saturday I am bigger than anyone else on the field
Every Saturday my colour is like the brown bark on a tree
Every Saturday kids rub there hands on me
like a piece of wood on an old piece of sandpaper
Every Saturday I look across the field and see someone doing the same as me
Tuesday, 9 May 2017
Tuesday, 28 March 2017
My Writing - What Are The Best Shoes To Wear In The Summer Sneakers or Jandals
Both sneakers and Jandals are adequate footwear to wear in the summer. They are both great for walks. There are good and bad aspects to both of these types of footwear. I will discuss the pros and cons of wearing either of these shoes in summer.
Primarily Sneaker’s are great for long walks and tramping because how they secure your feet. They have great support around your ankle and heel for walking. Furthermore Sneakers are a comfortable footwear because they give you padding on the sides for when you are walking around. In Addition Sneakers can make you end up with blisters especially if they are new shoes and you go for a long walk in them. However Sneakers aren’t easy to slip on and off because you have to tie your laces and untie when you take them off.
Primarily Jandals Are great for the outdoors and on the beach because you are able to go through the water because they are not all enclosed and it doesn’t matter if they get all wet and dirty because they are easy to wash. Furthermore Jandals Are easy to get on and off when you are in a rush to go somewhere because, you can just slip them on and off, because of the designed strap. In Addition Jandals Are only good for short walks not tramps or something like that because, jandals have no support and you can easily stub your toe or get a blister in between your toes. Finally Jandals Have all the mud and dirt flick up at the back because of the back bit when you walk everything can flick up. It can be annoying when you are getting ready to go out and things are flicking up.
I am going to recap some of my ideas about Jandals compared to Sneakers. If i was you and i was going for a on the beach or down to the river i would pick jandals. But if i was going for a tramp or long walk i would pick sneakers. So that is what i would wear in the summer.
Tuesday, 21 March 2017
Tuesday, 14 March 2017
My World War 1 Hero
Edouard Izac
Edouard Izac was the youngest of 9 children
- He served as Democratic Congressman, 1936-1947
- Full Name - Edouard Victor Michael Izac
- Died in 1975 was 100
- Represented California
- Died of congestive heart failure
- 19 grand children
- 25 great-grandchildren
- Only US Navy person to be awarded memorial medal in World War 1
I admire that he has been awarded the “Tiffany Medal Of Honour” and that he had represented California.
Tuesday, 15 November 2016
Passenger Jets
WALA: writing a good information report to inform people about passenger jets.
Tittle:
Passenger Jets
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3 Bit of information about the topic.
Macro Sentence:
Globally there are a number of Passenger Jets being used on a daily basis to transport people to and from places.
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Macro Sentence:
The Passenger Jets are a vital part for regions to join them all together.
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Macro Sentence:
Locally they are still an important means of travel for isolated communities.
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Linking Sentence:
The Passengers Jets are used a lot around the world for transport, for joining our regions together and making sure isolated communities can stay connected.
In excess of 10,000 flights take off worldwide, and are vital for connecting between, and within countries.
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Noun Group/Modifier:
Scheduled Flights,
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Complete the Topic Sentence:
approximately 100,000, transport people everyday.
They range from a small pencil plane to jumbo jets. The colours represent countries or companies. Passenger Jets are a streamlined creation.
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Visual Literacy:
Description bubble
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Noun Group/Modifier:
Passengers,
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Complete the Topic Sentence:
on average 8 million, fly daily. There are ultra long haul (12+ hours), long haul (6 to 12 hours), medium haul (3 to 6 hours) and short haul flights (under 3 hours) so they need to use up the time so they can listen to music, watch movies, read books and look out the window. In the plane they are seated in a certain seats for the trip. Passengers are admitted on in most flights, no matter how big or small they are.
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Visual Literacy:
Description bubble
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Noun Group/Modifier:
Safety
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Complete the Topic Sentence:
in a plane is all around you when you are seated. It protects you and it is there for the reason of saving your life. It is a large part of flights and it is very important.
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Visual Literacy:
Description bubble
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Conclusion:
Passenger Jets are good for transporting people to different regions and isolated communities. They are a very important way of travel.
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